.....<sound of air being sucked through teeth>...
<Takes Deep Breath>
1. Full stops are not hard to use and are lacking considerably.
2. The shape is an oval, not overal.
3. Capital letters at the end of sentences.
4. The word is pick, not pic.
5. For the love of god...its WRINKLES, not winkles!
6. The word is remember, not remeber.
7. When talking in the possessive, the word is his, not hes.
8. The word is you'll, not ull.
9. The word is hunch, not huntch.
10. The verb is know, not no.
11. The word is because, not becuase.
12. The word is puppets, not pupets
.....em, I could go on. Seriously though, if you want to make your flash animations look any way professional, use half-decent grammer.
Other then that, the flash was actually pretty good. If I was you, I'd release it again however this time using a dictionary.
One final tip, learn to take criticism. Its not particularly good natured if you give abuse to every reviewer who doesn't like your work.
p.s. Apologies if you're illiterate/dyslexic ect. No harm intended.
I understand, but some of thoes thing you said is just for short, like no insted of Know, and 2 insted of two, I also understand the other things you said like because, thats just a type error, but you can still read it, even if it is spelt wrongly, but the question is did you learn any thing, if yes then vote on that, if no then your welcome to vote as you have done, however im sure you did learn something
whenever i play the game it keeps hanging up on me when i get to stage 4. this is a class game so how can i fix this problem! i know im kinda cheating here by not giving a proper review, but if u know how to fix this problem, dont hold out on me!!!!
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